Monday, October 5

On and On and On

Prone to speaking long sentences? Melville takes the cake in "The Confidence Man":

"As, in gaining his place, some little perseverance, not to say persistence, of a mildly inoffensive sort, had been unavoidable, it was not with the best relish that the crowd regarded his apparent intrusion; and upon a more attentive survey, perceiving no badge of authority about him, but rather something quite the contrary - he being of an aspect so singularly innocent; an aspect, too, which they took to be somehow inappropriate to the time and place, and inclining to the notion that his writing was of much the same sort: in short, taking him for some strange kind of simpleton, harmless enough, would he keep to himself, but not wholly unobnoxious as an intruder - they made no scruple to jostle him aside; while one, less kind than the rest, or more of a wag, by an unobserved stroke, dexterously flattened down his fleecy hat upon his head."

WOWZA!! This makes Dickens child's play.

2 comments:

Patrick said...

ah hahaha!

Yasi Xu said...

goodness. now i see the point of those large chunks of foot notes. i read this paragraph 3 times...

glad you are reading this book first